Way too short
Very well done, but way too short. make it longer and i'll give it a 7, give it story as well and you got a guaranteed 10 with the quality of animation in this clip.
Way too short
Very well done, but way too short. make it longer and i'll give it a 7, give it story as well and you got a guaranteed 10 with the quality of animation in this clip.
I will make a longer and better one,I am glad that somebody like my animation!
play?
you need to make the next scene button more prominent and visible. people want to know how to go the next line of text.
sooooooooo was tht one little mistake worth taking 9 points off of this?
animation
you need better animation. and try to find music without that much swearing.
Lolz kk
graphics
you gotta make the drawing and animation better. Other than that it was okay. Maybe make the sound a bit better.
I don't wanna.
nice
i liked this, just give it more of a plot line and i'll give it a ten. and here's a tip, never say that its your first flash, or that you're a begginer, people wont even watch it, they just blam it.
That's an unfortunate representation of the community, but luckily I can only make that mistake once. Thanks for the heads up in any case.
Sooooooooo...... yeah.
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